A text of mine, whose format is pretty revolutionary. The narrative time coincides entirely with the narrative time. I only wonder why the television has not come up with the same idea. This should have become a veritable hit.
24
20:00
Actually Jacky Muller wanted just short of money . Fetch Had his girlfriend Sophie solemnly promised to hurry up. As often as she had already accused namely, need accessible for all that long. But once again he was stopped. First of five heavily armed police officers who, when he had just lifted off, doors open in the Santander Bank - Frankfurt, Voigt street corner - coveted. Were not just business hours and that's why they came clean only with a map.
20:04
Jacky noticed that two more people were staying in the lobby of the branch. A middle-aged man and a young woman. "I'm Jacky. And who are you? "He took on contact, because he needed someone to talk, if the cops so long was that it was boring. "I'm Ralf, the bank robbers!" He was not sure to have heard, correctly, frightened but afraid to repeat the question. He turned rather to the woman: "And you?" "I'm Sandy, the hostage" He had heard right.. Fuck Fuck Fuck! Jacky has preferred to curse in English, not to be understood by the bank robber. It was better not to annoy him. Ralf looked pretty dangerous. Would he get rid of this situation alive again? Looking back, it was a mistake that Jack did not let in the five policemen. But they were just now no time customer of the bank. And this was the mechanism, after all, since that one came in only with a map. Jacky had to act so different. Now he was thrown back on himself. "Uh, Ralf, Sandy! Then I have time. Otherwise, my friend complains. "" You stay here! "The Way of Ralf's gun was pointed at Jack Mueller. Now Jack could do no wrong. He had to say something spontaneously, with whom he has Ralf from the concept.
20:10
"But you have been Sandy. That's enough. "Jacky Six minutes had filed at this remark. "No! Two is better if a hostage on it goes. "The bank robber had his finger on the trigger. "But this is the hostage, not the hostage." Jack could not help him to correct here. The linguistic accuracy he had of his friend Jochen Schmidt. "Be careful what you say! Otherwise I pop you up. "" Please let me live. I have girlfriend and daughter. "Sandy took the floor. "Oh, that's nice. What is the name for the baby? "" I think Lena-Chiara-Joy. But now firmly nailed me please do not take that name. I'm not sure. I left my girlfriend when she was still pregnant. For professional reasons. I work that is in a copy shop. Here, just opposite. There is no time for family. "Sandy tears came to my eyes. But the bank robber was Ralf unmoved. Obviously it could not soften with Jacky Muller heartache. It would probably come to a showdown between the two. He had to Ralf, without noticing this, get them to disclose information about themselves. The more he knew about his opponent, the better he was ready for the fight.
20:15
In a subtle way to the bank robbers Jackie had elicited some useful information. Ralf was called with the last name was King, 52 years old, single. His favorite bands were carats and the Phudys, his favorite color magenta. He liked German food and likes to collect stamps. Previously he had worked as a border guard, but had lost after the fall of his work. In New Germany, he was aware occurred rapidly obsolete. He did not get more recognition for many refugees Republic of success - without a single missed shot, to have prevented from crossing. In the late 90s, he was marched through the wall is parked, his former section, and tried, those who sat on the eastern slope to prevent, to the transfer to the West, no one had it taken seriously. Over the years he was always more bitter and had finally decided to rob a bank to show Germany that one could not simply jump around with him Sun E-mail address and telephone number Ralf had not moved out, unfortunately. But Jackie was told by him that he was sitting in a wheelchair. Jacky had all along been wondering why Ralf said just sitting with him. Because the elevator at the Alex was not in operation, he had to Santander Bank so long that the store was closed when he arrived already. Now he wanted to stay here hold so he could run the next morning early in the morning's raid. Jacky gave me time. In the course of the night would make for Ralf Helsinki Syndrome noticeable. He would begin to emotionally bind strongly to Jack and Sandy and its objectives - a successful flight - sympathize. Jacky just needed some patience.
20:18
Still not had Jack and Ralf Sandy confessed his affection. Apparently it Jacky had to do here with a lobotomized bank robber, a callous killer. He could not wait any longer, otherwise, he and Sandy soon a bullet in the head. Important was the surprise. As Ralf not for a moment looked to his two hostages, Jacky was a flash Sandy first against the right, then left on the leg. Then he asked them to do the same with him: "We are unable to walk for him not to use as a hostage. I have seen in the series 24. "Unfortunately, Sandy was his request to withdraw it, no longer meet because he had broken both her legs. fuck fuck fuck, she is fine out. And I'm sitting still in the shit!, Jacky cursing in English, so it is not understood either.
20:21
Even the bank robber had apparently tired of waiting, perhaps because he had to go to the toilet, for now he called Sandy's and Jacky's bank card in order to bring the dough to a less spectacular way. When Sandy just jumped off by 50 €, because they had exhausted their credit line up to this silly amount. Now everything depended on Jacky's account balance. "The secret number, but immediately," "The secret is," Jacky felt little desire to open a bank robber so easy to open the doors of its riches. "The secret number, or shoot I do! "The was not really joking. "Ok, I'll even tip you. My PIN has only digits between 0 and 9, and exactly four. "" Well it works! If you lie, then it's your turn. "He began to experiment with different combinations of numbers. Jacky was relieved that Ralf was so simple.
20:22
Ralf had cracked the combination: 0002nd Jack wondered what he had done so quickly. With close to ten thousand euros rolled out of the store.
20:23
After Jack had made sure that Ralf was over the hill, he dared to stand up. Ralf had forced him all the time to lie on the floor, probably because himself as a bank robber did not want to expose the humiliating experience of having to look up to his hostage. Of course Sandy needed help, because both her legs were indeed broken. Using them in time to the morning with adequate supply of oxygen, he missed her a short mouth-to-mouth resuscitation and heart rhythm massage, which was not so easy because he had previously shot in the recovery position.
20:24
On the way home, he wondered what his friend would probably annoy more: € 500 over the loss or the fact that he had again taken so long? Perhaps he had Ralf in a wheelchair but still not the stairs to the subway station Samariterstraße should bear down. But there was no elevator stop.
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