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Dear Stefan, could you correct my thesis there are too many pages, more than 80, it should not be acting so mainly on whether to?.. something can be reduced. But the fact that everything is understandable. Thank you, your Hannah. Oh. 91 pages. Oh, no,! Hättick the mail just does not open. Why ick told my sister and my email address given? If ick told her would.. Hannah, I have no mail No, I did not even phone or postal address , then they would have my master's thesis can not be Why must always send me your work? What is their friend? Perhaps ick should finally get out with the truth. So I have my peace. ... Although, my ick, nor a master's thesis will surely write se non. I really must read something only once. Then dit is behind me. Let's see. Should be shorter dit. Ok. Well, no wonder. The font size: twelve. If the blind? Eight ranges fully. ... Nah! ... But not enough. We'll see. ... Ten. Still so small. Twelve! Shit! ... Sixteen ... Yes, now it is easy to read. So, how many pages there are now? 141? Since I have pretty well again with a red pen At its settings. ... We'll see. What is the name dit really, wat se da verzappft added.!.. "Migration and development - a qualitative study to return refugees and diaspora politics in Bosnia-Herzegovina" Mhm Dit you can still not be left unchallenged Dit understands but none since have still a Some statements ran. ... From Migration, since I've heard something. googled times. Oh no, that was what ranschreiben different. This time, sun and now Diaspora, dit's certainly not a look ... Oh there,'s do it ... and Bosnia-Herzegovina, as one would have to actually write one more time behind Mach wat ick times finished yet ... So, one more time to read the title. "migration (1 Geology: the process described in the oil and gas development, the petroleum and natural gas to the organic maturity of source rock to reservoir rock moves, 2nd sociology: in the broadest sense any longer-term change of residence in the geographic and social space; 3 Information Technology : switch to new technology, conversion of data formats, exchange of basic software, moving (to another server); 4 Astronomy: refers to a planetary train change of a planet during the formation of a planetary system around a central star) and development - including a qualitative study ( is in the social sciences, the collection of non-standardized data and interpretative, understanding meaning, hermeneutic or categories and understood theory-building evaluation) to return refugees and diaspora politics (The term Diaspora (Greek = dispersal) known since the late 19th century primarily religious or ethnic groups who have left their traditional homeland and dissidents living of large parts the world are scattered. It can also simply refer to a minority situation, especially a religious group.) Bosnia-Herzegovina (country in the Balkans). ... Read more plays. Chapter 1: Theoretical background! ... the early 90's with the concept of transnationalism, a new approach emerged in the research on migration, migration no longer conceived as a one-dimensional process, but across national boundaries existing relations of migrants to the research topic made. ... That is a hammer record. Nope. They can not as it stood. The need to revise them. The needs they share. So, time to rewrite. ... It was the early 90s. At that time was a new concept. The concept was called transnationalism. The approach (= concept) was part of the migration research (see explanation in the title). The approach is said, migration is not one-dimensional. Migration is not a process. The approach explored across the borders of nations. Sun Now I must be behind the words in brackets are the only explanations make and then it dit quite different. ... Done! ... Oh no, what is kind of a sentence? transmigrants operate within a transnational social field plurilokalen across national borders and form multiple identities . So, here it exaggerates real. Since I have to write but sometimes a comment. Too many foreign words in the sentence (7). This has sophomoric way. Who should read this? Try to write more easily. Short sentences, German words. Always remember: The average reader has secondary school degree. So now a quote. Well, why not: We have defined transnationalism as the processes by Which immigrants build social fields that link together their country of origin and their country of settlement. [....] Transmigrants develop and maintain multiple relations - familial, economic, social, organizational, religious, and political that span borders. Trans Migrants take actions, make decisions, and feel concerns, and develop identities within social networks that connect them to two or more societies simultaneously. ... What does that mean? love Hannah, please always translate. Websites in another language are always bad because it thinks the professor, you have to hide something. Here is my suggested translation: "We have transnationalism as the processes by which immigrants build social fields that linking their country and their country of settlement. Transmigrants develop multiple relationships and family, economic, social, organizational, religious and political, which is across borders. Trans Migrants take action to make decisions, and relates to the feeling, and develop identities in social networks that deal with them on two or more companies, "... Maybe you should omit the. You have to admit, in German it sounds much less than in English ...
Phew! That would be the first page. Man takes dit. How long has now lasted dit? An hour? How many pages are actually now dit? What? 145? Shit! How shall I cut dit to 80 pages? If this continues, has SE 500, if I'm through with the work. Dit ick created but never? Piss! Oh, never mind. Ick of the present write a mail to be curtailed. love Hannah. I have read your work. Was very good. Had to change nothing. Except for the first eleven pages. I would just leave. Are unnecessary. Then you get your 80 pages. And I would think about the title. Is too bulky. "Foreigners" I think upbeat. Until then, your brother ...
shit what I write here? I can not do that. It's all about her degree. love Hannah, ignore my mail from just. I suggest you not to let your work corrected by me. Unlike you, Mom and Dad take, I have not already habilitation. I have instead of school in the eleventh grade is canceled and now working as a salesman at McGeiz. I have told you nothing, so I do not think your a loser. What you write is my concern too high. I would like to take this opportunity to apologize immediately for not having informed you earlier. Your failure in the first bachelor's work would not be have been necessary. But I thought then, reads the papers so anyway. Please tell mom and dad any of it. Even if it does not correspond to reality, it would be nice if they keep me still for the more intelligent of us. Your Stefan.
